Saturday, December 8, 2007
Rewite the composition ( Final draft )
Yesterday, after lunch time, I met Jo. Then, she said she wanted to resd books. But she wanted to play basketball too. I said I read books and she said she read with. During the reading time, she read ' Little Women ' . She was confused because the was a Jo in the book! I was confused too. She was very happy now. She thought that she was very popular
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Jo is confused, yet popular. I'm a bit confused too; everything in this short narrative is rushed; there isn't much of a set up to this story or anything that happens in it!
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